According to your paper, my tutor gave me some new suggestions, but the order has been finished and I have to place another order and ask you to help me modify it. The following are my tutor's suggestions(I hope the price is right):
1.The draft does not position the topic within the general framework of the financial sector – nothing on financial intermediation and nothing on financial intermediaries as AI-centred platforms. A stronger positioning of the topic is needed.
2.Please provide a more precise exposition of ML and AI and introduce these technologies as general-purpose prediction technologies. This is important. A stronger theoretical exposition of these technologies is required.
3.You need to explore in some detail the role of prediction in the finance sector and provide examples of prediction tasks in the sector. This is essential for a high mark. You need to develop this point carefully. It is the presence of prediction tasks in the sector that makes ML and AI relevant. An excellent essay will also identify various types of ML learning in the sector.
4.You refer to the automation of managerial decisions but offer no discussion of the difference between prediction and decision tasks. Nor do you discuss the limits on automating decisions.
5.This is an economic essay. Relevant economic graphs will add value. Stronger use of economic terms is needed.
6.Try to include a couple of relevant data charts in the essay to enhance the analysis.
7.There are a number of incomplete references in the text. Please complete the references
8.You need to be present in the piece and provide a theoretical analysis. This is essential for a first-class mark but is currently missing. The essay is currently somewhat descriptive
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AI Articles:
1.https://www.wired.com/insights/2015/01/the-evolution-of-artificial-intelligence/
2.https://www.legalfutures.co.uk/latest-news/report-ai-will-transform-legal-world
3.https://www.brookings.edu/blog/the-avenue/2015/04/27/robots-are-infiltrating-the-growth-statistics/
4.https://www.thirdway.org/report/jobless-recoveries